A Reflective POV on my WIP

After writing over 20,000 words I'm considering changes in the story. Sigh.

Now with the story idea basically down I've almost decided to ditch some scenes and or just rewrite them to make the story better as well as to prevent the story from being evasive to the idea.

For instance. Instead of having Talon getting hired to track the cop killer who is either suspected of being a renegade vampire or someone who is doing their best to dishonor peaceful vampires living among mortals. If it is a renegade he will have to be someone pretending to partake in the Synthetic Blood (SB) Program or one who refuses. I do know the cop killer. Without doing a spoiler here I'll just mention he'll be related to the main character Talon Torran, who comes out of retirement to help cops track the killer.

Originally I was thinking of having a scene showing Talon in the San Francisco police department discussing the matter with the police chief who has been contacted by the police chief in Portland, Oregon where this problem exist.

Now I'm thinking it might be better to have that happened already. He's assigned a partner who'll be his mentor and since it takes several months for a detective to get re instated which means he won't be issued a gun until that happens. But his being a vampire Talon rarely uses a weapon, only his abilities.

I love the scene where Talon meets Dillon. I should keep it, but if i do, it might need reworded. Sigh.

Le Fey, Talon and Jude's uncle will already be owner of the Blue Witch, a gay bar where vamps & mortals hang out and where Jude works as a bartender. Jude hates his uncle for turning him and his brother. Their conflict will remain the same.

Without having any knowledge of the story what do you think about the changes?

Since I'm doing this story for nano I'm going to do my best to finish it the way it is. Then af ter nano make the .changes.

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